warhammer 40k comic (VERY WIP)

I've been working on a comic for the past few weeks, it is inspired by Mr-Culexus characters. But here is a preview of a early scene, with cypher.
Also, this is one of my first attempts to make a serious comic that I wanna finish, but the writing really needs some improvement. But when i'm done with the sketching i'll finish it with line art. I'm not sure if I will color it.

The story is obivously a spin off from Mr-Culexus comic "dranon the professional", and its meant to be a fan appreciation to his work.
The story is gonna be about the dark angels orbiting a planet that is occupied by Dranon and his warband of cultist. The dark angels is obivously there because of something else, but the build up will follow cultist chan and cypher making a strange alliance to take down the dark angels hunting him. Cultist chan will have face the dangers on the desolated planet to reach the chaos base. But again, hopefully i'll get it done.